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found this illustration and needed to give this girl a voice ~

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i have a secret i keep inside i tried to tell someone I tried i worried they would pick a side they didn’t listen so i lied keeping quiet to not upset the tide while in my heart feelings still collide i now seek places where i can hide and hope one day my anger will subside Read on air by invitation ~ March 19, 2021 'LATE NIGHT POETS' AP: 3rd place 2021, Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on February 7, 2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/10/2021 10:40:00 AM

An extremely emotive write Line, truly touching and heart-rending - so sad. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2021 7:24:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jennifer. Sad indeed that this is a reality for so many kids.

Nora Gibson

Date: 2/9/2021 9:00:00 AM

ahh, so sad..thanks for posting on my poem, so I was able to find you, great stuff..

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/9/2021 3:33:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit, Nora ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/8/2021 9:21:00 PM

So true; totally true. Sorry that it is, but it is. Well done my friend; shows your empathetic and compassionate heart.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/8/2021 9:35:00 PM

thank, Caren ~

Judy Ball

Date: 2/8/2021 10:25:00 AM

This is such a deeply touching piece. It leaves me speechless. The picture is worth a thousand words. Should be in with your BREAK MY HEAERT WHY DONCHA CONTEST. It's a winner. God Bless, JB

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/8/2021 1:52:00 PM

Darn, just missed it~ Thanks, Judy.

Gary Radice

Date: 2/8/2021 8:02:00 AM

A poignant poem Line, very well written with a very chilling title. It gave me the shivers.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/8/2021 1:56:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gary~

J. Summers

Date: 2/8/2021 4:59:00 AM

It is so sad that children, or anyone else for that matter, must sometimes fend for themselves when dealing with emotional issues. The hurting can last a lifetime. John

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/8/2021 1:56:00 PM

Absolutely, so sad. Thanks, John~

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 2/8/2021 12:38:00 AM

When we lose that fine thread that connects us to people who would lend a warm heart, a caring soul and an attentive ear.. when we feel lost in translation as our language couldn't be decrypted.. we just revolve around our inner worlds and hide inside.. how profound! How insightful! Always a great pleasure reading you, dear Line.. Best Regards. Love and hugs.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/8/2021 1:57:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Besma ~