Notes About The Poem

Our Seasons' Cycle



We waited so for Spring to come!
   It came and went, now Summer's here,
for sure, the best time of the year.

Long Summer hours provide more fun;
   outdoors midst nature's sceneries
fulfill warm-weather fantasies,

Like sea shore's magical sanctum
   'neath skies of blue, white sandy beach
and cooling waves within our reach.

Before we know, the path of Sun 
   will drift...then, fading summertime,
with changes to more chilly clime,

Will take us back to cool Autumn-
   recolor leaves from green to gold,
that leads us back to Winter's cold.

Then one more Winter to welcome
   to end our yearly season's tour
that bids us wait for Spring once more.

We waited so for Spring to come.
   Long summer hours provide more fun
like sea shore's magical sanctum.
Before we know, the path of sun 
   will take us back to cool Autumn-
Then one more Winter to welcome.


July 12, 2018

~11th Place~
Contest: New Constanza Poems
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Judged: 07/16/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 3:42 PM
Congratulationson your win Sandra! You know how highly I think of this marvel!
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Thanks again, Connie! :) :) Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 9:54 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed so much your imagery. :)
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:46 PM
Thank you once again, Susan, for your congrats and lovely comments. Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 11:18 PM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win. You took nature to a high poetic level.
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:46 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal, for your congratulations and lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra
Densham Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Congratulations! A fun Constanza Poem
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:44 PM
Thank you very much, Brian, for your visit, congrats and nice comment. Sandra
Pinet Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations Sandra, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Thank you, Emile, for another inspiring contest and for my nice placement! Sandra
Man Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 5:38 AM
Sandra, an exquisite four seasons write.. its lovely and a compelling read!!
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Thank you very much, Lyric Man. I always appreciate your visits and uplifting comments. Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 5:24 AM
Wow Sandra...you wrote a fabulous Constanza! You have weaved your second and third lines in seamlessly and I was only aware I was reading a Constanza when I got to the end stanza. Brilliant! I bet this one is a top winner. : )
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:41 PM
Thank you, Connie. I think that I mentioned before, but this is one of my favorite forms to use! I always appreciate your uplifting support! Hugs, Sandra
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