Our Loving

The moon's glow a pale champagne color As our lips glisten from loving each other Curves blend together taste of sweet nature's lust How your touch thawed my heart giving you my trust Sipping on you tasting of honey so sweet Slither up your body until our lips meet Your touch reminds me how you, I’ve missed Hands on my curves feeling like I’m nature kissed Like the wind takes a leaf gently to the ground You my love lay my sizzling flesh down Covering us in misty fog nerve endings on edge Awaiting with anticipation as if I’m on a ledge Fistful of hair tangled in your fingers Bodies feel like lightening vibrating as they linger Flesh catching fire is almost frightening With an electric lust has our bodies tightening Becoming more charged like the wind our beings produce an erotic whirlwind When the heaven's releases it's downpour we become soaked as our nerve ends soar Bodies shudder like leaves in the trees Laying wet and shuffled as we lay there pleased

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Date: 11/4/2024 10:02:00 AM
Imagination or practice?? Zowie!!!!! ;]
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/20/2024 10:59:00 AM
Arlo I do appreciate your support!:)
Date: 11/4/2024 5:54:00 AM
Sensuous and beautiful! Loving the champagne moon and the electricity along with the rainstorm metaphor.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/20/2024 10:59:00 AM
Thanks so much kim!:)
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