Maclawrence Famuyiwa Poet Rhyme

Our love's secret

Tonight, there's a secret I planned,
Fly me once more to fairyland,
In our quiet bed and in dreams,
As you have done through moans and screams.

Take me there and let me lie bare,
Till my eyes have wept their last tear,
So my love may restore lost beams,
As you have done through moans and screams.

Let your touch send me to the moon,
Let our love lift us like balloons,
And our hearts will flow in cool streams,
As you have done through moans and screams.

By the time our secret is known,
To all eyes, our love will have shone,
And my face will glow in soft gleams,
As you have done through moans and screams.

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Sara Kendrick March 21, 2025 at 3:11 PM Creative winning work. I am glad that I chose it to read today. Congratulations on it being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K Maclawrence Famuyiwa March 21, 2025 at 4:49 PM Thanks for taking time out of your busy schedule to read it. And most particularly, I appreciate your knd comment.

Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2025 at 4:55 PM That's a good kind of moans and screams. Sensual writing! Maclawrence Famuyiwa March 5, 2025 at 5:12 PM Thanks Andrea. Your comment is encouraging as always.