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Our Loved One

Our lives shall never be the same, For you were taken from us, which is a shame. You made our lives happy and bright, That's why none of this seems right. The way you brought out our best, With expecting nothing less. Your absense will be very hard to bare, And we all wonder how it is fair. To lose a loved one that's so dear, Which makes us realize what we fear. The lonely feeling that is in our very soul, Shall show us why we are no longer whole. You were a great person on this earth, And it all started with your birth. You will be missed with all our hearts, Our sorrow shall remain with us being apart. As we go on in our lives without you, We know that we shall meet in heaven, it's true. Because that is where you are, Which means you haven't gone too far. We just hope that you knew, Just how much everyone loved you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/2/2013 4:20:00 PM
wow Jessica,loved every line,this great person is smiling down at you,wonderful write
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Date: 1/25/2012 8:19:00 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Jessica. Love, Carol
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