Our Love Tribune

We laid on the beach after frolicking around.
Sand on our bodies, in our personal playground.

Ocean waves encampasses our love.
The night sky is clear with stars up above.

You kiss me passionately, awaking my senses.
My thoughts teasing my carnal inhibitions.

You embrace me and hold me tenderly.
Hold me forever, this night I will remember blithely.

My heart soars, our love will be a tribune..
You are my love, my man in the moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Torres Avatar
October 18, 2008 at 12:23 PM
Erin this is passion at its best. God bless Michael
Jordan Avatar
August 25, 2008 at 2:09 AM
Erin - Beautiful poem - I felt as though I should turn away embarrassed - The end twist really got to me - God Bless
Winter Avatar
August 23, 2008 at 6:30 AM
Such beautiful imagery. A night to remember indeed. You captured it well in verse to treasure forever. Well done. Love, Shar
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