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11/10/2024 for Allouette Me Poetry Contest sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

Our Love Abiding

Wave a magic wand.
Bring me to the pond
we two slowly strolled around.
Hand in hand, our walk, 
in soft tones, our talk, 
as, new love, we surely found. 

Overhanging trees,
gentle, soothing breeze,
swans, on the water, gliding,
as we did decide
you would be my bride,
since then, our love abiding.
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Agustin Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 7:47 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from start 'til the end. God bless you.
Crandall Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 7:48 AM
Thanks Beata - I appreciate your kind words!
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 11:31 PM
Sweet and nostalgic, David. Congrats and thanks for entering my contest
Crandall Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 7:42 AM
Thanks, it was a pleasure, Andrea - wonder what's next!
mysore Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 8:47 PM
romantic... congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
Crandall Avatar
December 3, 2024 at 7:42 AM
Thanks Thriveni!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 7:16 PM
Lovely, magical!
Crandall Avatar
December 2, 2024 at 8:31 PM
Thanks Kim!
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