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11/10/2024 for Allouette Me Poetry Contest sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

Wave a magic wand. Bring me to the pond we two slowly strolled around. Hand in hand, our walk, in soft tones, our talk, as, new love, we surely found. Overhanging trees, gentle, soothing breeze, swans, on the water, gliding, as we did decide you would be my bride, since then, our love abiding.

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Date: 12/3/2024 7:47:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from start 'til the end. God bless you.
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David Crandall
Date: 12/3/2024 7:48:00 AM
Thanks Beata - I appreciate your kind words!
Date: 12/2/2024 11:31:00 PM
Sweet and nostalgic, David. Congrats and thanks for entering my contest
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David Crandall
Date: 12/3/2024 7:42:00 AM
Thanks, it was a pleasure, Andrea - wonder what's next!
Date: 12/2/2024 8:47:00 PM
romantic... congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Date: 12/3/2024 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Thriveni!
Date: 11/10/2024 7:16:00 PM
Lovely, magical!
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David Crandall
Date: 12/2/2024 8:31:00 PM
Thanks Kim!

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