Our Love

~~*~~ The touch of his lips, makes my every hair stand on end. The feel of his touch, makes my heart flutter like a love song. His eyes cross mine as we collide. Our hearts connect as one, in the darkened night. Never alone we will be. We have each other for eternity. I have written about love but this poem shows love between two people.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2011 9:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P. D.'s "first love poem (on the soup)" contest Cory. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/29/2011 5:37:00 PM

Congratulations Cory, a delightful write, well done...Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2011 10:54:00 PM

this is beautiful, Cory. congratulations on your win in the contest.

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/28/2011 10:21:00 PM

Very nice Cory. Congratulations

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/28/2011 9:59:00 PM

CORY,.. Congratulations on your wonderful win, IN MY "first love poem on the soup" CONTEST* I would also like to thank you for the support. Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.

Summer Uchacz

Date: 9/29/2011 9:32:00 AM

TRULY AMAZING.... KEEP WRITING :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/22/2011 4:19:00 PM

thankxx cory for your vote of confidence luv.. your words parallel mine as well my friend.. hope all is well ..we are moving still for the next 30 days..among raindrops ..oh..