Our Love

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The touch of his lips, makes my every hair stand on end. The feel of his touch, makes my heart flutter like a love song. His eyes cross mine as we collide. Our hearts connect as one, in the darkened night. Never alone we will be. We have each other for eternity.
I have written about love but this poem shows love between two people.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 9:09 AM
Congratulations on your win in P. D.'s "first love poem (on the soup)" contest Cory. Love, Carol
Foster Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 5:37 PM
Congratulations Cory, a delightful write, well done...Margaret
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 10:54 PM
this is beautiful, Cory. congratulations on your win in the contest.
Quigley Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 10:21 PM
Very nice Cory. Congratulations
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November 28, 2011 at 9:59 PM
CORY,.. Congratulations on your wonderful win, IN MY "first love poem on the soup" CONTEST* I would also like to thank you for the support. Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.
Uchacz Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 9:32 AM
TRULY AMAZING.... KEEP WRITING :)
Sweetheart Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 4:19 PM
thankxx cory for your vote of confidence luv.. your words parallel mine as well my friend.. hope all is well ..we are moving still for the next 30 days..among raindrops ..oh..
Fiery Avatar
September 22, 2011 at 3:34 PM
U TOUCHED MY HEART WITH YOUR SWEET WORDS. I HOPE U SUCCEED IN LOVE AND EVERYTHING U DESIRE. THE POEM IS EXCELLENT
Onclaud Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 3:44 PM
undulating as the sultriness of touch.. a really good melody, cory.. wow!..:) hugggs, nette
Kendrick Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 2:52 PM
Very passionate work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Love is great..Sara
Osita Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 1:44 PM
"We have each other for eternity" a very lovely poem. Have a great day
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September 19, 2011 at 11:54 AM
Lovely poem!! enjoyed reading your wonderful work!!!=====Lori
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