Our Love

Have someone caught your eyes
In mine?
Had anyone glimpsed
Our love?
There's one secret that I kept, 
But I'm dying to divulge.
Yesterday
I saw you
With her hands in yours
She gazed you the same way
As pearls to ocean floor.
If this is just to make me jealous 
Here are my wounds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Puddifoot Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 5:13 AM
oh i like this! the gut punch last line..you are a unique voice in poetry
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August 27, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Glad you liked it
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