Our Little Briar Rose

Diamonds on her fingers. Diamonds in her nose.
She’s dancing in the street, our little Briar Rose.
Her hair is a twirling, as if it is glittery and on fire.
Her energy is amazing; she will never tire.

The neighbors are smiling, and stamping their feet.
They love our Briar Rose, her clogging can’t be beat.
Some run out to join her.  They are having so much fun!
It’s amazing to watch our daughter turning everyone!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rodrigues Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 7:24 AM
Whimsical, sing-songy and all out cute, my friend!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 7:25 AM
Thank you Kim. I am so glad to see you!
Somadas Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 2:04 AM
Beautiful rhyme... Your little Briar Rose turning everyone including me...
Krutsinger Avatar
December 8, 2019 at 2:37 AM
Thank you Jenish.
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