Our Liberty Blazing Soldiers

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Soldiers of our armed forces, Iraq, Afghan, Lebanon, many shores, Light the way like liberty blazing torches They fight heat, bugs, sand, tough faces, urban warfare, darkness, crashed doors, Soldiers of our armed forces Now Send home change of addresses, stories, photos, emails, strange places, Light the way like iron cut by torches Camouflage faces, wet bloody bruises, brows sweating, under helmet gushes, Soldiers of our armed forces Sleep in sandy humid desert trenches, thunder blast, bombs dropped, fire fights, Light the way like laser torches Loved ones wear yellow broaches, anxiety, praise, tears, vague smiles, Soldiers of our armed forces, Light the way like liberty blazing torches. © Joseph S. Spence, Sr., (Epulaeryu Master) 6/23/2010 All Rights Reserved.
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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 1:28 PM
Profound and so real. Can't wait till God's Kingdom (gov.)rules over earth, be no more wars, dying crying.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 6:25 AM
Wow, Joseph, this is an amazing write! A fave!
Foster Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 12:10 AM
This is a great poem, but it's not a villanelle.
Brown Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 10:40 AM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be truly outstanding Joseph. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
Doreus Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 7:19 AM
thank you for this... touched me deeply, recently had a brother die serving his country
Lacey Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 1:20 PM
great tribute to our soldiers
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Joseph. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
Adeite Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 3:25 AM
Congrats Joeseph on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
Sweetheart Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 8:44 PM
Congrats Joseph on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a nice one to share with us all..with luv..
Haick Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 7:38 AM
My congratulations to you, Joe for your HM in the contest with this captivating write in honor of our Men in arms. Peace, love, audrey
Mills Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 7:26 PM
your details captures the essencein this wonderfully orated poem. You should be proud of this one! Love, Susan
Sweetheart Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 6:53 AM
Congrats Joseph on your HM in Dr. Ram's contest with this wonderful and deeply touching write and win ... this is indeed a special honor for a special piece of poetry.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii... AlohA...
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 12:38 AM
This one was the most relevent to our "day", Joseph. Congrats on your win. This is a very nice poem. LUv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 11:27 PM
Congratulations Joseph on your success in DR Ram's Competition. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 10:47 PM
Congrats on the HM win in my contest
Keogh Jr. Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 5:45 PM
I give this a top mark because it is technically superior and it is truly heartfelt. I like your subtle variationss on torches. You should be proud of this. I was reading it. Regards, Gerard.
Slaughter Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 4:28 PM
Wow! Spectacular write here! Thank you for your dedication to our men over there. I have a nephew and a cousin in that hellish place, Afghanistan!
Haick Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 10:40 PM
A true gem, Joseph! A wonderful dedication to our Men in Arms! Peace, Audrey
Stella Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 7:32 AM
great entry again joe for docs contest always proud to read one of these loved the imagery and topic keep that pen flowing good buddy and sweet brother hugs
Harrison Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 10:33 PM
Very enjoyable poem!
A   Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 6:57 AM
Such a graceful write John,,, a fairely good tribute to those out there risking their lives at the cost of their live's hoping to soon enough make a difference...P.D.
Chachere Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 10:30 PM
great dedication.its needed.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette
Mehta Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 7:24 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest
Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 5:46 PM
Great write honoring our men and women that join the military knowing that there is the possibility that they may have to give their all...Keep the patriotic pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Hales Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 1:09 PM
Great lines makes you really think xx well done you !!! sarah x
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