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Our Last Thoughts

… well I had a hell of a ride

won’t go to heaven but paradise needs fire

goods innings they say

but I am more of a Rugby man

plenty of tackles tries and drop goals


I sought resolve in defeat

a few yellows but not once a red card

never understood why it is called sin bin

and wore my jersey with pride


now it’s the corpse dress

innocent and bloody 

at the same time

never immaculate but

high quality fabric


some of my battles were silent

no major wars in my neck of the woods

a few forests burning and now I join the fertile soil


I was conceived into this life

as I want to leave it

with fun merriment and passion


no medals in my urn

a few achievements 

five children to my name

a wonderful wife who shared my journey

the reaper is not as grim as could be


no pain a last breath exhaled

nothing more to say

than I love you

who is to know I might see you

at the other side of somewhere


I would not change a thing if I could

because you who mattered most

gave me the honour to be loved


my seeds are sown

the harvest in store

sandalwood torch handed over

the party may start

as soon as my ashes have flown

                                        into the unknown certainty of infinite essence …



24th April 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/20/2021 4:58:00 PM
Ahh Michael my mate This touched a nerve Rugby is the most honourable of sports. No place or where to hide on a rugby field. A true team sport. Favourite
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 5/20/2021 5:10:00 PM
When we moved to high school from primary school we couldn't play football only rugby so as act of defiance because we were English not Afrikaans we refused to play. And i so regret it because i came to it late but would have loved to have tried playing it. The Boks winning the 95 Eorld Cup at Ellis Park has to be 1 of the greatest sporting accomplishment in history
Date: 4/29/2021 12:49:00 PM
This is superb!! I like so many different expressions in this- my seeds are sown the harvest in store sandalwood torch handed over the party may start as soon as my ashes have flown I like that the best! all the best in the contest!
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