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I found a p a s s i o n so deep in my heart, When we are together lost the MAGIC of time It gives me relief during distress, I write honest words of ballads and r h y m e When dark days arrive in solitude, We balance each other out in contentment I know this LOVE is so true, Free from the torment of blame and resentment I knew not adoration before us, Only you i g n i t e my tempting blazing fire You knew not the depths of TRUST, And bring me seductive appealing desire After the snowfall comes the Spring With all the b l o s s o m s a love can endure And inside my soul you give such pleasure, You bring such ENTICING honest allure Before the days of joy, I saw loneliness, Now we’re compatible with truth and ease I saw not things you show me s w e e t h e a r t, As the days of anguish decided to cease Forgiveness became lost and I found FAITH, There’s one thing you should always know It’s when you embrace me with your hands, With you by my side my HEART shall g l o w I wish you never to let go of my heart, When the willows weep I shall always remember I promised you a love so s i n c e r e, The day we said our VOWS in late September So, when the storms arrive I guarantee, To you I shall always love with all my s o u l And vow to honor our commitment, Realizing that our HOPE can always make us whole I n e e d you more now than ever before, I know you need me to express our love in song With a tune so g r a c e f u l we can grow old For with your DULCET melody we can never go wrong And prove to God we could get through, Anything we encounter during this great love's life With faith in a d o r a t i o n inside us, I SHALL VOW TO YOU TO BE YOUR WONDERFUL WIFE Poem Within A Poem Rhyme 2 - Poetry Contest October 19, 2017

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Date: 11/16/2017 9:27:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Congrats on your win, Laura.
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Date: 11/3/2017 3:47:00 AM
And that's what love is and suppose to be, congrats on your win
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Date: 11/2/2017 11:51:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura on your great win.
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Date: 11/2/2017 9:12:00 PM
Amazing, Laura, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/19/2017 10:41:00 AM
Great work LuLoo, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 10/25/2017 6:32:00 AM
many thanks dear Charlie :)
Date: 10/19/2017 10:28:00 AM
Great write.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/25/2017 6:32:00 AM
thank you! :)

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