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Our Great Love Prevails

I found a  p a s s i o n  so deep in my heart,
             When we are together lost the MAGIC of time
It gives me relief during distress,
              I write honest words of ballads and  r h y m e 
When dark days arrive in solitude,
              We balance each other out in contentment
I know this LOVE is so true,
              Free from the torment of blame and resentment
I knew not adoration before us,
              Only you  i g n i t e  my tempting blazing fire
You knew not the depths of TRUST, 
              And bring me seductive appealing desire
After the snowfall comes the Spring
              With all the  b l o s s o m s  a love can endure
And inside my soul you give such pleasure,
              You bring such ENTICING honest allure
Before the days of joy, I saw loneliness,
              Now we’re compatible with truth and ease
I saw not things you show me  s w e e t h e a r t, 
              As the days of anguish decided to cease
Forgiveness became lost and I found FAITH,
              There’s one thing you should always know
It’s when you embrace me with your hands,
              With you by my side my HEART shall  g l o w
I wish you never to let go of my heart,
              When the willows weep I shall always remember
I promised you a love so  s i n c e r e,
              The day we said our VOWS in late September
So, when the storms arrive I guarantee,
              To you I shall always love with all my  s o u l
And vow to honor our commitment,
              Realizing that our HOPE can always make us whole
I  n e e d  you more now than ever before,
              I know you need me to express our love in song
With a tune so  g r a c e f u l  we can grow old
             For with your DULCET melody we can never go wrong
And prove to God we could get through, 
             Anything we encounter during this great love's life
With faith in  a d o r a t i o n  inside us,
             I SHALL VOW TO YOU TO BE YOUR WONDERFUL WIFE



Poem Within A Poem Rhyme 2 - Poetry Contest 
October 19, 2017

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