"our Glow"

When two stars cross paths up in the sky..
Their glow touches and are forever tied..
We can rotate through the world and not 
pass our light so soon..
But our connection is for life for we have
passed through each others' moon..



for W.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 4:07 PM
Good one..Very romantic.. Sara
A  Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 2:34 PM
THIS MUST BE ABOUT TWO LOVERS, ENJOYED THANK YOU
Devonshire Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 10:12 AM
An indelible impression your star "W" has made on your life, Michael. Very nice! Love, carolyn
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April 24, 2010 at 9:31 AM
You have me smiling with this one. Nice dedication. Keep on writing! Karen
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