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Our Friendship Will Never End

The first time the two of us met, We were caught in a friendship net. You make me crazy, You make me go insane, You make forget about the pain. Whenever I have problems I ring your doorbell, You help me and I help you, That's one of the reasons our friendship works so well. You tell me what's right or wrong, I'll always depend on your advices all life long. You stood by me through thick and thin, My life became easier when you walked in. I'll always be thankful for the moments we shared, They brought us closer like butter and bread, If we always stick together, I promise you my friend.. Our friendship will never end.

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Date: 6/12/2013 8:52:00 PM
I like this one-- good job. I don't like the way you punctuated some of the lines, but the poem has a definite beat to it. Dress it up and it would make a nice present for anyone. g
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Date: 6/12/2013 1:00:00 AM
Aisha, That is a very sweet poem about your friend who ever he may be. You write very well so keep up the good work and I may review some more of your poems later. John
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