Aisha Alansari Poet Rhyme

Our Friendship Will Never End

The first time the two of us 
met,
We were caught in a friendship 
net. 

You make me crazy,
You make me go insane, 
You make forget about the 
pain. 

Whenever I have problems I 
ring your doorbell, 
You help me and I help you,
That's one of the reasons  our 
friendship works so well. 

You tell me what's right or 
wrong, 
I'll always depend on your 
advices all life long. 

You stood by me through thick 
and thin, 
My life became easier when you 
walked in.

I'll always be thankful for the 
moments we shared,
They brought us closer like 
butter and bread,
If we always stick together,
I promise you my friend..
Our friendship will never end.

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Gabe Shelly June 12, 2013 at 8:52 PM I like this one-- good job. I don't like the way you punctuated some of the lines, but the poem has a definite beat to it. Dress it up and it would make a nice present for anyone. g

John Ginesi June 12, 2013 at 1:00 AM Aisha, That is a very sweet poem about your friend who ever he may be. You write very well so keep up the good work and I may review some more of your poems later. John