Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Rhyme

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- Our First Kiss -

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                                  Under the            red umbrella
                               The young and beautiful Annabella
                              Small rain drops with shades of blue
                            A lovely memory to remember with you

                                  The rain that came from above
                                              was pure love
                                     Love, honesty and respect
                                      what we always expect

                                         This summer's night
                                       our first kiss goodnight
                                           The way we feel
                                               always real
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02.11.2018
Sun :) A-L Andresen :)
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The Red Umbrella Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Eve Roper

1st place in the contest

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John Castellenas April 30, 2019 at 11:45 AM Wonderful poetry for the kiss. I did enjoy. Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2019 at 2:06 PM - Glad you enjoy my poem, John :) - Many thanks for your comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight November 19, 2018 at 6:06 PM A very cute love poem inside a heart, Anne-Lise! Well-done, and congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2018 at 12:25 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carole Duet November 17, 2018 at 2:37 PM What a lovely and sweet poem! Great imagery. And, congrats on your win! :D Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2018 at 2:39 PM - Glad you enjoy my poem, Carole :) - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison November 17, 2018 at 1:02 PM what a beautiful romantic poem and you have created a wonderful heart shape:-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2018 at 1:26 PM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May November 15, 2018 at 4:18 PM Congrats on your win Anne.. Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2018 at 2:03 AM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper November 13, 2018 at 11:07 PM Thank you for entering my contest, Sunshine, you had everything I was looking for. Your shape poems have always fascinated me. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2018 at 2:06 PM - A pleasure to attend your contest, Eve - Thanks for my place on the winning list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong November 13, 2018 at 8:43 PM This charming shape poem was a delight to read Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) Anne-Lise Andresen November 14, 2018 at 2:08 PM - Glad you enjoy my little heart poem, Connie :) - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels November 10, 2018 at 12:00 PM Hi Anne-Lise. I really like the spirit and imagery captured in your words, here! The little heart-shape is a bonus!! Best of luck with the contest. Regards, John. Anne-Lise Andresen November 12, 2018 at 2:04 AM - Glad you like it, John :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid November 6, 2018 at 5:01 AM anne lise truly excellent red umbrella how the rain falls from above sparkled down in your pen wishing you a blessed week dear friend Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2018 at 7:55 AM - Many thanks for your valuable comment, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile November 5, 2018 at 12:35 PM This is such a beautiful take on the photo Anne-Lise! Romantic and sweet! Happy Monday xxoo Anne-Lise Andresen November 5, 2018 at 12:40 PM - Glad you like it, Mike :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos November 5, 2018 at 12:17 PM Hi Sunshine, An awesome poem, which sends tingles down my spine remembering my first kiss! A great write - congratulations. xoxo, Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen November 5, 2018 at 12:29 PM - It must have been a bit of a kiss, Jennifer :))) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Faraz Ajmal November 5, 2018 at 10:59 AM What can be better than the memory of your first kiss? And you have explained the situation so well, it was a really lovely poem and I absolutely love reading it, I wish you best of luck in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day Anne-Lise Andresen November 5, 2018 at 12:26 PM - A sweet thing to remember, Faraz :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose November 4, 2018 at 4:43 PM No greater memory then the night of our first kiss, you say it with love in your heart, a winner by far S. S. hope all is well, sending you a hug Anne-Lise Andresen November 5, 2018 at 12:25 PM - I have read so many beautiful poems for this contest, Pixie .... it will be difficult for Eve to "choose winners" ... in my eyes all are winners :) - Many thanks for your good words and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire November 4, 2018 at 11:32 AM Ah, Sunshine, what a lovely "first kiss." Perhaps you also had to change your poem to a rhyme form, and it works beautifully. Love the Heart shape as well. Sending winning wishes your way. Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen November 4, 2018 at 11:40 AM - No, it became a new poem Carolyn ... I'm not good to rhyme in English :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven November 4, 2018 at 9:53 AM Hi Anne-Lise, see the write has changed, and what an anazing change it is, to rhyme. An excellent new poem The Contest). I feel that this write will do well in the contest, good luck. I did wonder if you would change the original. This is an excellent write, the words paint such beautiful imagery in such a gentle song. A journey through your words is like a journey through the stars, Heavenly. A fave Anne-Lise. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX Anne-Lise Andresen November 4, 2018 at 11:42 AM - I had it in my mind, Mike ... but chose to write a new poem ... a bit shorter :) - Many thanks for your valuable fav. and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick November 3, 2018 at 4:53 PM Reads like winning material. Enjoyed reading your romantic work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen November 4, 2018 at 6:29 AM - Many thanks Sara, for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May November 3, 2018 at 4:50 PM Beautiful write Anne...Gl in the contest.. Anne-Lise Andresen November 4, 2018 at 6:29 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis November 3, 2018 at 12:33 PM Lovely romantic poem that makes the heart beat widely each time the lips meet! Excellent dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen November 4, 2018 at 6:26 AM - Glad you like it, Demetrios :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham November 3, 2018 at 12:44 AM Each one so far different, amazing how we all interpret the picture.I thought not many words rhyme with umbrella but you found one, who can ever not remember that first kiss. Good luck. Tom. Anne-Lise Andresen November 4, 2018 at 6:28 AM - Many beautiful poems and all different ... but the same starting point :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell November 2, 2018 at 4:04 PM Great romantic piece Anne-Lise, well penned indeed. Blessings, Gordon Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2018 at 4:07 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit November 2, 2018 at 4:00 PM A poem from the heart..nicely done, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2018 at 4:02 PM - Many thanks for your valuable comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands November 2, 2018 at 3:37 PM Very sweet Ann-Lise. I enjoyed this :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2018 at 3:40 PM - Glad you like it, Heidi :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green November 2, 2018 at 3:03 PM Beautifully done my friend. I truly do not think there is anything more magical than that first kiss. Best of luck in the contest Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2018 at 3:38 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Chris :) - Rhyming in English is a big challenge for me ... but, do my best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)