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Our Echo Tales

If they draw too close, I will call your name Echo—lame An unenviable feat despite a large crowd Echo—proud A brotherhood against fighting for love Echo—shove Because everyone seeds the same fruit Echo—root Each lifespan is an echo of the one before Echo—door They used what they learned to find a better Echo—letter. As it's our time to be silent, we may pray Echo—astray. The truth our voice carries will last forever Echo—clever Lengthy lyrics imply that life is a dance ECHO—trance Randomness is just one heartbeat away Echo—pray. Aerodynamically, we float alike butterflies Echo—skies breath along with your silent words Echo—swords
Written: February 11, 2023 A Brian Strand Choice No 1185 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand ECHO VERSE The formula for echo verse is rather straightforward: Repeat the last syllable (or syllables) of each line. Sincere gratitude is extended to Brian Strand, who pioneered the use of this format.
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Edmonds  Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 4:08 PM
A fabulous Echo Verse, Echo-Sotto. Best wishes for Brian’s contest… Belle
Goldsmith Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 11:36 AM
A creative write. Love the beach picture. Wish I was walking on it. Thanks for the note about Brian Strand. I just learned something. Have a great day writing away.............
Buhagiar Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 1:32 AM
Another echo poem. Best for a win.
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