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- Our Children's Future -

a timeline ... in a world full of suffering ... justice







13.05.2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Dutta Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 10:50 PM
Be optimistic. Our children and grandchildren will observe better world.
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 4:11 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romios Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 2:02 PM
It must be difficult to be so wise in so few words. Not one of my abilities. Panagiota. One day...perchance!
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 4:10 AM
- Many thanks Panagiota, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 7:51 PM
Enough of this sort of poetry may yet yield some results. Good to see versatility in what you write. Regards David in NZ. I have finished my chemo. Start Radiotherapy in couple of weeks.
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 4:10 AM
- Many thanks for visit and comment, David :) - Get well soon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcconnell Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 12:49 PM
Nice pic with apt words Anne-Lise, simply put!
Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 1:36 PM
- Many thanks Gordon, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 1:11 PM
Wise and uplifting words, Anne-Lise...applying to both Monoku and accompanying picture. May justice prevail. Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 1:31 PM
- Many thanks Paul, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poetry Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 5:17 AM
Man must learn real justice, divine justice!... meanwhile let's all pray... ! Well done dear Anne-Lise salute alkas.
Andresen Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 11:39 AM
- Many thanks for visit and comment, A.P. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vangaveti Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 6:33 AM
Eye-opening :)
Andresen Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 1:58 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Swetha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horne Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 7:34 AM
such a powerful message here
Andresen Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 1:56 PM
- Many thanks Jack, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 3:25 PM
I see it's a POW!! Congrats. it delivers a punch.
Andresen Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 1:55 PM
- This is not a p.o.t.w., Andrea :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 3:25 PM
ohh, so soft yet powerful one-liner, anne... much enjoyed!... happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 1:55 PM
- This is not a p.o.t.w. :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 3:27 PM
and a POW!... congrats!
Kiser Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Pow! Quite profound!
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 12:54 PM
- Thank you very much. M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 7:48 AM
An effective use of one line. Hugs Rick.
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 12:54 PM
- Thank you very much, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 6:54 AM
Uplifting Monoku dearest, Anne-Lise! Much liked! Hugs xxx
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May 14, 2019 at 12:53 PM
- Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 6:42 AM
Beautifully written, my friend.
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 12:53 PM
- Thank you very much, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rushing Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 4:12 AM
Few words filled with wisdom! They shall be led by a child. Love the picture!
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 12:52 PM
- Thank you very much, Wren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 3:36 PM
That is such a potent write..well expressed, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 12:52 PM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 2:33 PM
what a lovely thought Anne-Lise and I love the picture too:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 12:51 PM
- Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 2:10 PM
No better timeline could be...Lovely one...Somehow it was meant to be...
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 12:51 PM
- Thank you very much, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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