Our Big Five-Oh

Golden rings on held hands
city streetlights glow
voiceless given glance
extended serenity
eyes for each other
a long road walked.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 11:40 AM
Great entry for Lines contest. Congrats
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 12:56 PM
Thanks a whole bunch, Happy Hallows Eve, Aloha~William.
Kauffman Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 11:50 AM
William, how wonderfully you have spoken of a committed marriage from the wedding day through the years! Congratulations on you win! Malama pono, e ku'u hoaloha! Blessings!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 12:03 PM
Sounds Russian to me, ahh, the Greeks lost it pushing the half non-faithful Cretes around, but hey, malama pono, a hui hou, Wiliama.
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