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Our Beginning

Over your shoulder you peer at me and smile turning my heart into a beating drum I want to open to you this room filled with others at various levels of every day seriousness transforms into a bedroom in its center bed sheets pushed to the side invite us into the opening my thoughts are there within it as your blue eyes scan my shape I wish the light to be dim I feel the world with us and want it to fade away and this room to be ours alone filled with the quiet urgency of relieving the heated weighted pull that burdens us Our Beginning; Poetry by Susan M. Walker 2014

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Date: 3/6/2016 12:16:00 PM
That's unique write Susan
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Susan Walker
Date: 3/6/2016 1:39:00 PM
thank you. This one is near and dear to me. I appreciate your comment

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