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Our Apartment

We decorated the place Made it fit to our style Hardly have any space We'll only be here for a while. The walls are painted green And the carpets green too The neighbors, not seen But some others, you do. Its nice and small For it being our first place One day, we'll have one big and tall With all tons of space.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/5/2009 8:55:00 AM
Awww...how sweet...I remember my first apartment too....similiar here we all know it is only for a short while.....The Southern Belle
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Date: 10/23/2008 8:07:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I hope we see more of your poetry here soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2008 12:03:00 AM
baby steps, look at this as just a stepping stone, it does not have to be forever, and the bright side of it is that some people have no shelter at all, nice write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/4/2008 3:18:00 PM
Still, it is your family that makes it a home, of course, no matter the size. Hope your dream of a bigger house comes true one day soon. Welcome to PoetrySoup! Love, Shar
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