Ouch

Diving in head first
Love crushes me instantly
OUCH! When will I learn?

lifelost loveloverecoverysenryu

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James Foulk

May 15, 2011 at 11:32 AM

you know when i was a teenager i fell in love so fast and easy, i was always getting hurt, saying no more, when will i learn, so i can relate to this fine piece you wrote. thank you for commenting on I wish i was a cloud.

Andrea Dietrich

May 13, 2011 at 11:43 PM

Very cute!

Lisa Cooper

May 10, 2011 at 7:26 AM

short and sweet what a treat!

Poet Destroyer A

May 7, 2011 at 2:54 PM

R.M.lol.. i can't help but laugh... because... ain't that the truth.. when will we learn... ouch.. to it all... i think since we dive head first... we forget when its over... lol... take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 7, 2011 at 8:29 AM

Cool and creative pice R.M. and diving into anything head first willl cause an OUCh luv.. especially luv.. it is a learning process .. delightful read..thankxx for your sweet critique on my poetry too...