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Otzar Vacant

The sparrow's song falls silent upon my dulcimer pulse with collisions most violent replacing verve's firm impulse. In these kinetic visions I find my current suppressed by limitless decisions impossible to digest in the whorl of such motion until hate gets hurled about to replace my devotion with vast abundance of doubt. This mind must grind when inclined to shake my mantle away from blind invasions maligned that only serve to betray the hope I scope on my slope when I reach out uncluttered to grope and cope at your rope until the Guf gets shuttered.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/13/2009 6:33:00 AM
ahh the Guf....yes...souls..sparrows...interesting write..the rhyme is a bit overwhelming of the seriuos topic...perhaps dial the internal rhyme back a notch? The first 2 lines ..rock!. Light & Love
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Date: 11/12/2009 4:38:00 PM
I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration John. Love, Carol
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