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Ototoxic Orbiting

Your love orbits my celestial body causing earthquakes and floods, Within a calamitous canopy mixing of the barbarous bacterial bloods… A seditious satellite roaming amongst the scintillant sacrificial spheres, Hiding amidst your clever cloaking giving me many torrential tears… Your Supernova will combust leaving you stranded throughout the galaxy, As the ashes that turn to dust releasing me from your gravitational agony. Sept.30.2019 Brevity Poetry No More Than Six Lines Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger Music: Mysteries of the Space Age Part 2 By Jamuroo N/A for contest
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Proxenos Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 3:22 PM
What can I say ^WW^ other than you are making poetic history. 'Your love orbits my celestial body causing earthquakes and floods ........Your Supernova will combust leaving you stranded throughout the galaxy' Terrific write. Hugs, Jenn.
Sands Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 5:39 PM
Well done for the contest WW ! A lot put into 6 lines :)
Michael Avatar
September 30, 2019 at 3:34 PM
You're not far off...this will be as it is written...Nice one
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