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Ototoxic Orbiting

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Your love orbits my celestial body causing earthquakes and floods, Within a calamitous canopy mixing of the barbarous bacterial bloods… A seditious satellite roaming amongst the scintillant sacrificial spheres, Hiding amidst your clever cloaking giving me many torrential tears… Your Supernova will combust leaving you stranded throughout the galaxy, As the ashes that turn to dust releasing me from your gravitational agony. Sept.30.2019 Brevity Poetry No More Than Six Lines Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger Music: Mysteries of the Space Age Part 2 By Jamuroo N/A for contest

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/3/2019 3:22:00 PM

What can I say ^WW^ other than you are making poetic history. 'Your love orbits my celestial body causing earthquakes and floods ........Your Supernova will combust leaving you stranded throughout the galaxy' Terrific write. Hugs, Jenn.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/30/2019 5:39:00 PM

Well done for the contest WW ! A lot put into 6 lines :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/30/2019 3:34:00 PM

You're not far off...this will be as it is written...Nice one