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Otherwise Occupied

Not seeing me, you say But I’m here everyday Because you look with physical eyes You miss that which my soul disguise But I’m still here, still living, still breathing Other tasks to which my minds in-keeping My priorities set, but better yet Entwined in things I won’t regret Make your mark I’ll make mines’ too But until then, do, stay true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/6/2017 5:38:00 PM
great write. line 4 should be changed to You can't see my soul when in disguise the sentence as it stands needs disguise as a plural, which does not fit. sorry to intrude on your words please write more!
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Date: 1/5/2017 8:32:00 AM
Happy New Year Carlene...you've touched a nerve here.....very nice.
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Date: 1/1/2017 4:38:00 PM
The title drew me in...And I was not disappointed - Nicely penned, Carlene! All the best for your New Year - Cheers! :) john
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