Other Side

3/27/22


What's going on in the skies?
Sometimes
It all was just lies

People still trying to cut in the bus line
Attempting to sever all blood ties
Occurring behind the scenes or on the frontlines

So much love inside
Struggling, but trying to put the alcohol and drugs aside
If need be set the guns aside

Something died
Reached the other side
For a long time I suffered by
Not giving it all another try

Eventually discovered I
Could do it all otherwise
Now is the time, no need to wait until summertime

Still I must climb
Before and after the sun rise
It all continues on ceasing to subside

Unlike any other guy
If I want, I'll make the dust fly
Although it is not all cut and dry
Can't just always settle for being 'just fine'
In order to truly feel sublime
Knowledge and effort had to be applied
Instead of paying it all no mind
Letting it get brushed aside

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Date: 3/27/2022 9:26:00 PM
Very positive and invigorating poem Dalton, thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Date: 4/3/2022 8:31:00 PM
Thank you Ultimate Spectator, appreciate the feedback.
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