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Two years after a fall in our garage and a fractured back, I was diagnosed with acute osteoporosis.  This diagnosis came as a shock and was a life-altering moment.  After two years of daily teriparatide injections, my bone density improved to ‘almost’ osteopenia. I now receive a much stronger injection (Prolia) twice a year. , I’m delighted to be able to walk briskly for two hours every day and complete weight bearing exercises at the local health club.  Calcium and Vitamin D supplements are also my friends. Still, I have to be cautious, taking smaller steps when I walk and being cognizant of my balance.  

OSTEOPEROSIS

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the spine remembers each vertebra a fallen city~ skyline slumped, streets narrowing to cautious steps
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Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2026 at 5:52 PM
osteopOrosis ~ poor brittle bones
Hind Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 9:00 PM
Wow. You really made me see it with new eyes. Amazing metaphors
Brotherton Avatar
March 4, 2026 at 6:30 PM
Hugs to you, Sarah.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 10:44 PM
awww, thanks for your kindness
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