Osmosis

Autopilot tired
broken wings
sore in soaring flight
fluttering, down-spiral 
clouds streaming beyond fog 
drowsy
then, 
three barrel rolls
swirling through silver light
simulcast storm shakes black topsoil
mineral enriched,
vitamins collide,
seep through porous skin
providing synthesized eruptions
cataclysmic spasms drop knowledge undetected by erudition
 
Thick walls wobble, crack, then begin to close in on the thin skull
a metaphysical transformation manifests 
three!
three!
threes permeate 
preserving Oblivion...
 
Earth, moon, stars
proton, neutron, electron, 
mother, father, child

Fertile land dissolves for the horizon
turquoise soaks toes
and so 
an enigmatic awakening 
idle imagination swiftly shifts gears here
from stationary stone 
to being thrown through the moon
effervescent agitation bubbling oceans strewn
triggering intensity
tridimensional trepidation 
sleet sheets pelt clipper ships

Parochial, no longer the vision
mood scoots through sinister to happy-go-lucky 
three grim blankets lift from melodramatic souls

This mighty universe revolves
aflame with AGAPE...

                                         (*sappy to sophisticated)
The final oscillation 


©2014 ~JSL PoetTreez Publishing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/14/2014 11:56:00 AM
I admit upon seeing your title- I was expecting something different, but was pleasantly brought along for this unexpected & dynamic ride-- what a layered journey, do keep on writing your wonderful poetry! Very nice sprinkling of alliteration here, too! Really enjoyed reading this and happy to see you here!
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Date: 6/14/2014 11:51:00 AM
Domo arigato, Joey!! Looky looky who is back!! That pen name of yours has stuck with me, but ah, me liking the "esoteric" part of your name now--- I have been meaning to ask where you were--stumbled upon your name when I was looking at some of my old writes-- and then I see your avatar on the home page! Your poems are always such a pleasure to read-- food for thought and me loving your wordplay (you do it so well!) and the so many layers of meaning that one can deduce from this-- cont'd
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Date: 6/13/2014 10:40:00 PM
gosh it is very SCI FI sounding but also metaphysical. I think it is a spiritually symbolic one as well. (hope I did not get that wrong) I see you have a fan using your avatar with you. Awesome!!
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Date: 6/13/2014 10:38:00 PM
10 thousand new poems, huh?? So where the heck are they/ hahaha. Let me read this one now!!!
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