Ornate Gate

Came spring with fragrance
On ornate gate red roses 
Lit with dancing drops 
On leaves and petals sparkling
Robin waking up dawn



Fifth Place Winner: Andrea Dietrich: Tankacrostic Poetry Contest
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Merryman Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 2:42 PM
A lovely picture, Frances! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Y. Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 2:39 PM
Hi Frances, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-)Alexis
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June 6, 2021 at 12:35 PM
this is a really beautiful poem and I would have scored it higher if you had used a one word title and rhymed it. Gorgeous! Congrats in my contest.
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