Orlando and Sandy Hook

Orlando and Sandy Hook

Advantage of always take advantage of
To do is what a bunch of people love
And of course we have heard as of late
Congress finds ways for funds to misappropriate.

Several of their feelings recently were fixed
All four gun control measures  now are nixed
And instead of into the past each one fade
Republicans want to come to everyone's aid.

Instead of some having to end their career
Trying to make gun control bill be their idear
And all of the credit eventually want to get
Makes them feel good lets go ahead and let.

See my friend how easy it was to do
Democrats had bright idea out of the blue
Up whole congress finally became shook
By filibuster about Orlando and Sandy Hook.

James Serious Mysterious Horn
Retired Veteran and Poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Garcia Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 7:37 PM
I clicked on "read new poems" and up yours popped so I rolled with it. There's tons of great writers like yourself on here so I usually let chance be my navigator. Hasn't failed me yet
Horn Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 8:34 PM
PG, Guess I will have to do that sometime. My biggest problem is I have written over 2,500 poems and spend a great deal of my time writing the. Jim
Garcia Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 1:51 PM
Summed up much more cohesively here than on CNN or Fox. The rhythm seemed spot on too - I can't quite put my finger on it but it seemed to flow with purpose to mimic how our officials govern. I'll have to chew on it a bit and come up with a better way to describe what I'm trying not to trip over
Horn Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 5:26 PM
PG, Great comments and analysis. How did you happen to find my poem? Jim Horn
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