Orion

Hot shot
Sworded swagger
Flashing boldly unconscious
Glommed to center of attention
Easy to spot.... (not hot)

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Written by Nancy Jones on the Fourth of July, 2012
For Nette's "Pen a Pensee" Contest
Grammatically questionable, and includes words I made up since there weren't any existing words available to say what I wanted.
Really enjoy star gazing :)
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Onclaud Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 2:09 PM
SOUP MAIL! :)
Maverick Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 3:38 PM
Got to admire the spirit you show Nancy.." there's more to communicating than dogma!! well done..!
Henderson Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 4:43 AM
I also to enjoy it Nancy. Good luck in the contest. Peace and blessings to you.
Poet Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 1:29 AM
Good one Nancy.Best wishes.
J.T. Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 1:27 AM
nice poem on this constellation of the greek hunter, Orion. - JH
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