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THE CONTAGIOUS ORIGINAL SIN

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Alexis Y.

February 2, 2023 at 2:28 PM

Hi Shirley, You’ve a well written and truthful haiku. I appreciate that you stopped by my page today:-)Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

January 31, 2023 at 1:45 PM

It took one sneeze….

Shirley Hawkins

January 31, 2023 at 2:35 PM

Bless You! Lol.

Sara Kendrick

January 31, 2023 at 1:28 PM

Sad that one man sinned and therefore brought sin to all humankind. We have to go to the foot of the cross like everyone else. Thank you for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley

January 31, 2023 at 1:23 PM

Contagious, yes, that is for sure. There is a cure though....a Blood transfusion by a donor named Jesus <3 This is a powerful monoku. Really got me thinking! Great write.