Originated

THE CONTAGIOUS ORIGINAL SIN

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Alexis Y.

Date: 2/2/2023 2:28:00 PM

Hi Shirley, You’ve a well written and truthful haiku. I appreciate that you stopped by my page today:-)Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/31/2023 1:45:00 PM

It took one sneeze….

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 1/31/2023 2:35:00 PM

Bless You! Lol.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2023 1:28:00 PM

Sad that one man sinned and therefore brought sin to all humankind. We have to go to the foot of the cross like everyone else. Thank you for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/31/2023 1:23:00 PM

Contagious, yes, that is for sure. There is a cure though....a Blood transfusion by a donor named Jesus <3 This is a powerful monoku. Really got me thinking! Great write.

John Lawless

Date: 1/31/2023 10:45:00 AM

Then again, "there is nothing original about sin" or so I've heard

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/31/2023 1:57:00 AM

That is so true. Blessings.