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(“Original Sin”, 2016, original pen and ink, acrylic and oil)

Original Sin

Buddhists don’t talk of original sin
The way Christians do,
But they both talk about the same thing;
That in the beginning there was light
And the Word, and the missing of the mark. 
For Buddhists this “sin” is basic ignorance,
The ignoring of who and what we are.
For Buddhists experience is divided 
Into two basic categories;
Enlightened, or Nirvana, and
Deluded, or Samsara.
Nirvana is peace.
Samsara is suffering.
The experience of each are thus polar opposites,
But the simple original sin,
The fundamental deviance,
Is that Samsara arose from the desire 
To improve Nirvana, our original nature.
So Samsara is Nirvana plus desire,
The desire to personalize it,
Put our mark of identity on what was
Already always perfect.
To extend the cross cultural metaphor
You could say we wanted to give it
The mark of the beast.
And that’s how we lost the light.

(8/16/26)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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August 17, 2026 at 9:43 PM
Dear James, Did you paint that? Its beautiful! And I must say I absolutely love the essence of this poem and what youv conveyed in such a wise manner! I also love the lines "Nirvana is peace. Samsara is suffering. The experience of each are thus polar opposites, But the simple original sin, The fundamental deviance, Is that Samsara arose from the desire " such thought provoking lines! Pleasure reading you Sending you light always 💫
Moore Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 6:32 AM
Hi Ink Empress, thanks for the note and kind thoughts. Yes that is a painting I did. All the best to you!
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