Origami

Folds of paper edges in shape
delicate tales of intricate drape
thousand beautiful Origami cranes
holding hearts in wedlock chains
a crescent moon, no lines or creases 
crumpled papers ...in bits and pieces
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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August 20, 2023 at 1:50 AM
Ahh, the rhymes are stunningly woven, giving such a mellifluous flow to this piece.. I love how you've incorporated the whole concept of origami and painted it with a tapestry of emotions.. "Holding hearts in wedlock chains" Beautiful!
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August 20, 2023 at 2:05 AM
Thanks for the appreciation. I read that in Japanese weddings it is believed that origami Cranes fulfill the wishes of the couple
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