Oreos

eating oreos if you like the creme center unscrew the cookie crunching oreos feeling famished, just dive in chocolatey chewing extracting filling detach the white from the brown eat the frosting first

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Kurt Ravidas

Date: 8/15/2019 1:28:00 PM

Actually, detach the white from the black, according to Russian wiki, but it sounds a bit racist) Anyway, I do agree: eat the frosting first ^____^ Love you haiku, John.

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 8/20/2019 5:19:00 PM

We had pretty similar ones and the white used to go first)

John Bertin
Date: 8/16/2019 9:08:00 PM

I knew a poem about oreos could seem racial, but the poem is super simple. I remember being eight years old and we would discuss the different ways of eating oreos.

John Bertin

Date: 8/15/2019 1:08:00 PM

thanks Jan, :) hugs John xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2019 11:32:00 AM

Love the poem but can't abide the actual cookies!:-) hugs jan xx