John Bertin Poet Haiku

Oreos

eating oreos
if you like the creme center
unscrew the cookie

crunching oreos
feeling famished, just dive in
chocolatey chewing

extracting filling
detach the white from the brown
eat the frosting first

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Kurt Ravidas August 15, 2019 at 1:28 PM Actually, detach the white from the black, according to Russian wiki, but it sounds a bit racist) Anyway, I do agree: eat the frosting first ^____^ Love you haiku, John. Kurt Ravidas August 20, 2019 at 5:19 PM We had pretty similar ones and the white used to go first) John Bertin August 16, 2019 at 9:08 PM I knew a poem about oreos could seem racial, but the poem is super simple. I remember being eight years old and we would discuss the different ways of eating oreos.

John Bertin August 15, 2019 at 1:08 PM thanks Jan, :) hugs John xxx

Jan Allison August 15, 2019 at 11:32 AM Love the poem but can't abide the actual cookies!:-) hugs jan xx