Orchestra of Waves

Evening tide crashes,
Sun sets into the ocean:
Symphonic surges.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 3:55 AM
Beautiful. Exceptional use of words. Love the feelings and sounds your words bring to this Haiku Raul. Love, Carol
Peranteau Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 2:44 AM
Beautiful,..just beautiful Raul ! Great Haiku Sir ! james
Lopez Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 8:18 PM
the crashing waves make a beautiful sound that is heard through this write, very nice Raul!
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September 16, 2009 at 2:31 PM
I like your use of sight and sound images in this poem. The title fits well with the poem. Much captured in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my haiku. Keep up the good writing. Karen
Lacey Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 2:30 PM
sure is a peaceful thing to behold
Shahwan Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 1:09 PM
Beautifully penned. pl insert bright..sun set in the bright ocean, 5/7/5. More haiku pls.
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September 16, 2009 at 1:00 PM
This is much like the sounds and sights one hears on Florida's Gulf coast, Raul. Truly a delightful "Orchestra of Waves." Is your book out yet? Love, Carolyn
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