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Orchards of Opportunity

Orchards of Opportunity Alone in the orchard of opportunities surveying the ripened potential I pondered the fruitful labor of others enviously sniffing the succulence of success. Knowing that their success was only mine in theory, in dreams, in unlimited potential. Before me lay the future’s untilled fields awaiting a touch, a vision, an awakening. Planting a thought, a theory, an inspiration, tending it, winnowing the weeds of doubt, nurturing a simple truth long dormant in the arable corners of an open mind. 10/24/2016 submitted to – Opportunities – Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/4/2016 3:28:00 PM
you surprise me with your splendid metaphors, john... your word-seeds bore great fruits.. happy congrats on your citation.. huggs
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Date: 10/24/2016 8:11:00 AM
John, I think you're an excellent poet! I also think this is a perfect example of my reasoning. Well done, my friend!
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John Lawless
Date: 10/29/2016 6:32:00 AM
Hey Daniel, alway nice to hear from you. Appreciate the support.
Date: 10/24/2016 7:38:00 AM
A glorious find, does make the finest of wines. Thanks for sharing your mind. Peace and many blessings my friend.
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John Lawless
Date: 10/29/2016 6:31:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Steven
Date: 10/24/2016 7:37:00 AM
Wow . This one is great! I enjoyed this. Well written and perfect ending too!
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John Lawless
Date: 10/29/2016 6:31:00 AM
thank you Heidi for stopping to read and comment on my work

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