Laura Hay Poet Acrostic

Orchard Fantasy

Opulent surroundings this fine orchard dwells
Royal blood runs through each and every branch
Grand displays of brightly coloured fruit
A vast covering as far as the eye can see
Nectar sweetens the air and fills the honey bees
Idyllic when at one with nature all around
Cultivating the paths to my inner sanctum

Fine fruits tantalise my watering mouth
Rich in vibrancy ready to be picked
Ultimate pleasure soaks my desire
Indulgently I accept the sumptuous offerings
Tantalising my tongue as I sink my teeth to bite 
Succulent pieces fill my stomach and my soul

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Andrea Dietrich September 11, 2016 at 10:19 AM you utilized the letters in Organic fruits deliciously!! to come up with an elegant sounding poem here. it's too bad this contest got changed around. i think you did quite well with the theme!! Laura Hay September 14, 2016 at 10:28 AM Thanks Andrea for your kind comments. I didnt plan to enter this in the contest as i knew i'd never complete in time, just enjoyed the challenge instead, warm regards, Laura.

Andrea Dietrich September 11, 2016 at 10:17 AM first, thanks for what you said about my picture. Remember, 60 is the new 50!! i love it, though, when people think i still look like when i was in my 40's! let me read your poem now. Laura Hay September 14, 2016 at 10:26 AM I hope i look this good when i'm 60! ;) x

Sarban Bhattacharya September 9, 2016 at 6:23 AM Really nice poem featuring on the affinity of man and nature, Laura. Laura Hay September 9, 2016 at 9:52 AM Thank you for stopping by and your kind comment Sarban!

Timothy Hicks September 3, 2016 at 5:14 PM You are making me hungry for a big bowl of fruit right now, Laura. Lol. A lot of tasty language in this orchard rendezvous of yours ... nicely penned. Laura Hay September 8, 2016 at 4:18 AM Thank you for your kind comments Timothy! warm regards Laura.

Paul Callus September 1, 2016 at 4:40 PM You paint a most attractive and tempting orchard, Laura. Living in the countryside I am lucky to witness and taste these tantalizing fruits on a daily basis. #7 Warm regards // paul Laura Hay September 2, 2016 at 7:27 AM How lucky you are indeed Paul, thanks for your kind comments and for the rating too! Warm regards, Laura.