Orb

orb of ghostly light
enchanting and entrancing
always out of reach
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 2/4/2014 3:26:00 PM
NIce one. I have seen an orb of light in a cemetery like this once!!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/4/2014 3:37:00 PM
wow Andrea fantastic experience ty hugs
Date: 2/4/2014 9:34:00 AM
Mystical!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/4/2014 10:10:00 AM
ty Rick hugs
Date: 2/4/2014 2:07:00 AM
I can feel the expectation, and distance in this one Shadow..'
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/4/2014 2:27:00 AM
ty Joe hugs
Date: 2/3/2014 11:33:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku.... I love Haiku's and Senyru's the say so much in so few words... Enchanted Piece :)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/4/2014 2:27:00 AM
yes it is a lovely form I prefer traditional style myself Debbie ty for reading hugs
Date: 2/3/2014 2:23:00 PM
I always go to the moon whenever I'm getting close to a writers block, it is my muse and I can come up with an endless supply of glorious material based on the moon! And this one is a perfect example of the moon bringing muse to someone...I believe that the moon was your muse at that moment when you wrote this because it is so good! What a spectacular piece, such a grand poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/4/2014 2:21:00 AM
if anything Russell your poem was my muse lol Like you I turn to the moon or even a list of random words. ty dear man your comment means so much to me Shadow x smile hug
Date: 2/3/2014 11:49:00 AM
- Great haiku, Shadow ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/4/2014 2:18:00 AM
hi Anne Lise ty dear hugs
Date: 2/3/2014 10:27:00 AM
Ghostly light is unreachable; great Shadow. Kayod5.
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Date: 2/4/2014 2:17:00 AM
ty Kayod5 hugs
Date: 2/3/2014 10:18:00 AM
Very nice Shadow...Tim
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/4/2014 2:17:00 AM
ty Tim hugs
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