Orb

orb of ghostly light enchanting and entrancing always out of reach

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2014 3:26:00 PM

NIce one. I have seen an orb of light in a cemetery like this once!!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/4/2014 3:37:00 PM

wow Andrea fantastic experience ty hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/4/2014 9:34:00 AM

Mystical!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/4/2014 10:10:00 AM

ty Rick hugs

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/4/2014 2:07:00 AM

I can feel the expectation, and distance in this one Shadow..'

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/4/2014 2:27:00 AM

ty Joe hugs

Debbie Mills-Kelly

Date: 2/3/2014 11:33:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku.... I love Haiku's and Senyru's the say so much in so few words... Enchanted Piece :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/4/2014 2:27:00 AM

yes it is a lovely form I prefer traditional style myself Debbie ty for reading hugs

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/3/2014 2:23:00 PM

I always go to the moon whenever I'm getting close to a writers block, it is my muse and I can come up with an endless supply of glorious material based on the moon! And this one is a perfect example of the moon bringing muse to someone...I believe that the moon was your muse at that moment when you wrote this because it is so good! What a spectacular piece, such a grand poem, Great Work!!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/4/2014 2:21:00 AM

if anything Russell your poem was my muse lol Like you I turn to the moon or even a list of random words. ty dear man your comment means so much to me Shadow x smile hug