Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Out on the porch, probably about a year ago..The sun coming up reminded me of dreadlocks in color the way the great artist had painted the lines in the sky..Sara

Orange-Red Dreadlocks

She wore orange-red dreadlocks
Danced on the horizon far away
Setting the woods on fire
Stirring up all kinds of desire

Roosters arose with voices of power
Sleeply pines in silhouette still stood
Dormant in cold and frozen twigs
She stirred the air to warm and play

Happiness she brought
Sent the cold swiftly away

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M.I.A . December 25, 2011 at 7:39 PM told you i'd come back and i simply have to write something about this beautiful piece you got here Sara. She came to live from your pen, wonderful!

Christopher Bunton December 22, 2011 at 12:54 PM Beautiful Sunrise!

Robert Johnson December 20, 2011 at 11:35 AM Beautiful mahn.

Don Johnson December 19, 2011 at 7:07 PM fires get rid of old dead grass, Aboriginies light them, if you ask, the green then starts showing through, eat the lizards cooked well too, at last....love the poem Sara.

John Loving Iii December 19, 2011 at 6:23 PM very curious. jhl

Matthew Anish December 19, 2011 at 4:48 PM A fine piece of work. "Orange - red dreadlocks" - I have never seen that phrase in a poem before. Very original! Peace & love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen December 19, 2011 at 2:14 PM Sara,this one....BEAUTIFUL !! oxox Love Anne-Lise

Audrey Haick December 16, 2011 at 1:17 PM The glorious sunrise, personified! Beautiful one, Sara! My best wishes for blessings to you during this holy season. Love, Annalise

Laura Breidenthal December 15, 2011 at 10:18 PM Wow! Wonderfully penned! Quite vividly beautiful! Always, Laura

Bl Devnath December 15, 2011 at 8:10 AM Wonderful write I have read just now. Nicely worded this line 'She stirred the air to warm and play'. Loved it. Thanks for this new one and for your valuable comment. bl

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2011 at 6:13 PM this is a great way to personify, Sara. WELL done!!

Poet Destroyer A December 14, 2011 at 9:58 AM Good morning Sara, how are you? a very sweetish dance... seems as if nature is dancing ... enjoyed,..p.d.

Jack Horne December 14, 2011 at 9:22 AM I got some great mental pictures from this one! Love it

Harry Horsman December 14, 2011 at 9:17 AM Enjoyed Sara, so different, yet so you. love this. harry

Carol Sunshine Brown December 14, 2011 at 7:42 AM Wishing you glad tiding for the upcoming Holiday Season Sara. It is the time of year to reach out to old friends and new friends as well. As the old year ends and the New Year arrives I wish blessings to you and yours always. May you be blessed with inspiration and see your writing endeavors cascade upward in 2012. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey December 13, 2011 at 4:45 PM Beautiful write Sara! I enjoyed in particular the line, "...Stirring up all kinds of desire" That was a great line, you put a bolt in me of this desire! Awesome Work!!

Doris Culverhouse December 13, 2011 at 4:33 PM interesting idea....enjoyed reading today!!

Elizabeth Wesley December 13, 2011 at 1:47 PM Sounds like someone from the 60's. They were all strange to me at that time.

Tony Lane December 13, 2011 at 1:13 PM A free spirit I think.