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---Orange Daylilies

orange daylilies
bright trumpet of gray morning
deer tracks in the loam

animalsnaturehaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

December 7, 2012 at 3:22 PM

love this...pd

Judy Ball

June 27, 2011 at 6:37 PM

Nicely done with great imagery. Good stuff. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

June 23, 2011 at 7:14 PM

I love this contrast of bright trumpets and gray morning. Very cool, Debs.Are you trying out different haiku to choose the best one for Rick? Let me see your others.

Debbie Guzzi

June 24, 2011 at 4:50 AM

So Andie [this was my second choice] are all 3 actually haiku?

Andrea Dietrich

June 23, 2011 at 7:13 PM

debs, in response to your "more calcium" here is the thing, my body doesn't absorb it well and I do take different supplements and I have strong bones from weight bearing training. the charlie horses I do not have that often, when I was young. horrible!!! NOw to read and comment on your poem.