Orange Bonfire

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There was laughter in the crisp autumn air, And a large bonfire blazed on the beach, As the birds came singing from everywhere, Under a sunset orange and gold as a peach! The burnt orange flickering of the bonfire, Echoed the feverous light of a waning sun, Like euphoria that always takes you higher, Smack dab in the middle of revelry and fun!

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/13/2021 4:51:00 PM

This one smack-dabs me with all that revelry and fun, under the orange sun... Suddenly I am craving a creamsicle... Hmm. You have a future in advertising with that company, Evelyn. I'll be your reference... :) gw

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/13/2021 6:35:00 PM

Would you?! I've had thoughts along those lines of late. We used to call those dreamsicles, and now I want one. Thank you for your thoughts. :D

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/9/2021 1:43:00 AM

Fabulous imagery. Let there be great fun with such a poem. Hugs.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/9/2021 9:57:00 AM

Thank you for a pleasant comment. Your appreciation is a delight.