Orange

Off to the nowhere
Start from scratch
Start with talking
Begin with a hatch
All new color
Red White Blue
Yet Blue takes over
There’s no clue
Always been the favorite
Always been the best
Orange was the color
Despite all the rest
Dipped in Orange
Without real feel
All in Blue	
Early to Heal
Wild Lonesome Tiger
Craving for his streak
At least for a moment
To have a proper break
	
It’s always hard to witness	
It’s always tough to choose	
Coz either way you’re moving	
Someone’s got to lose	
You’ve gotta have the faith	
And eagerness, go define	
Believe your inner call	
You are strong as Carbyne	
Rise up, aim high	
Up above & fly	
Failure’s not an option	
You are hell as Carbyne	
	
Off to the nowhere
Keeping the promise
Lack of Orange
Useless time piss
Stalk you, lecture you
Here begins my game
Drive you mad
Till you forget the name
Renew the life you had
Strive & fit the theory
If facts don’t fit the theory
Change’em, destroy the theory
Break the habit, go insane
Act like crazy, but lead the game
For you know sometime, you might feel the shame	
Don’t hate yourself then & carry the blame
It’s one life you live
With mighty typhoons
Red White Blue
Or Orange SNAFU!
	 
It’s always hard to witness	
It’s always tough to choose	
Coz either way you’re moving	
Someone’s got to lose	
You’ve gotta have the faith	
And eagerness, go define	
Believe your inner call	
You are strong as Carbyne	
Rise up, aim high	
Up above & fly	
Failure’s not an option		
You are hell as Carbyne
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 8:41 AM
nice win Sameh, xox...SKAT
Madappattu Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 9:45 AM
Color speaks in volumes...EXCELLENT
Wahid Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 5:06 AM
True, thx a lot Syam :)
Lamoureux Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 9:04 AM
Welcome to the soup, an excellent first post, well done!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 9:23 AM
Drop by and let me know when it is done.
Wahid Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 9:11 AM
Thanks a lot Mr. Richard.. It's my pleasure you have read it.. I'm working on a new one hopefully will finish it within the next couple of days.. Sameh
Mehta Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 10:06 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, Same
Wahid Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 1:10 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram :)
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January 8, 2014 at 12:42 PM
congratulations same xx
Wahid Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 1:10 PM
Thx Mandy xx
A   Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 3:33 PM
Same, . Congratulations, and thank you for entering my contest. It has been a delight hosting so many contests. If you like you can enjoy the hugs, I left all winning poems on my blog "I WILL BE FAITHFUL." link-------> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18505&PoetID=18720 <----- Enjoy and stop by if you'd like...... Always & Forever ** LINDA
Wahid Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 1:10 PM
Sure I will, thx Linda :)
A  Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 6:50 PM
Same, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Wahid Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Hey Skat, so sorry for my late response.. Happy u loved the poem! I'm not active 100% but I'm trying to find the time for it! I will visit yours, it would be my pleasure.. Love, Sameh
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January 4, 2014 at 11:53 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Same ! - A very well written poem !! - I like it a lot. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Wahid Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 3:52 PM
Thx Anne-Lise it's my pleasure & I'm happy u liked it.. I'll post more when I have time.. It seems interesting here & I'm going to follow your work too.. Have a blessed 2014.. Lots of love.. Sameh
A   Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 11:02 AM
We need to have faith.. We need the orange in the sky... Interesting ending... LINDA
Wahid Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 3:49 PM
Thx Linda, I'm still new here & I'm exploring but I promise I'll be more active.. I'm glad u liked the ending & yeah orange is definitely important!
A   Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 11:00 AM
Same, ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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