Oracle

Summer memories
drift softly in autumn’s breath
forewarning of snow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 12, 2009 at 7:49 PM
James, this is a lovely reflection of the ever-changing seasons. Thanks for your kind words re: Mr. Mark. He was a fictional character, truly a composite of so many workers who give their lives to an unappreciative employer. I like your writing style - Carolyn
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February 8, 2009 at 8:07 PM
Nice haiku James great use of imagery...Raul
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
changing season's, I like this poem. good write
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