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healthy or not let's make our tracks don't walk the path of desire pretty or not primarily it is your soul I admire alert or not hear dark thoughts whisper so do always pay heed got lost or not through mess and maze I am the one who will lead fearful or not I pave the way for you don't mind if it´s steep drowsy or not I watch beside your bed as long as you sleep I will stand guard that's fast and hard I´ll be around ease will be found and time will tell all shall be well noble or not I never count the things I take or I give wealthy or not they say on bread alone good men do not live furious or not let anger drop and breathe a sigh of relief dumpish or not do not allow the ill succeed as time thief righteous or not light-footedness we will get when we forgive faithful or not regain your joy and learn to love and to live let go the fear shelter is near I´m on your side you are my pride and time will tell all shall be well see me or not I strengthen you from a position behind footloose or not when you are cured my own way out I will find to win you stand I hold your hand begin to see how to be free and time will tell all shall be well I´m not a native speaker, probably there are mistakes in grammar and vocabulary. So I cordially invite other members to send me suggestions for improvement as long as rhyme and rhythm are kept. Thank you very much!

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Date: 5/31/2022 8:40:00 AM
Anton, I think your poem is beautiful. Frankly, I wouldn't change a single word. It flowed well and the theme was consistent. Good writing!
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Anton Bradinger
Date: 6/24/2022 11:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Milton! I wrote this one (and "whether resistant") for a young woman who bravely fights against BPS.

Book: Shattered Sighs