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Optimistic You

Your heart is the sea
That's wild and free as can be - 
Optimistically

We made some progress
Engulfed in enjoyment - yes?
Let's be joyous...YAS!

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Jonna Gallano

January 18, 2016 at 2:45 AM

Yours is so great!

Michael Whatley

January 16, 2016 at 6:45 PM

YAAAAS (couldn't help myself). I like to think we all have an optimistic persona, perhaps in a constant conflict with a cynical one to even things out. Simple and effective, nice one J.W!

David William Breidenthal

January 16, 2016 at 7:35 PM

That's perfectly fine with me. Indeed, we do. We have pros and cons in our human nature; but, positivity, as a whole, dominates all in our clever character. We are in conflict with our pessimistic, negative point of view as well as fighting the good fight naturally. Thanks! I did that on purpose - simplicity in poetry and art says more than a thousand words. We just need to think outside of the box and think upon the true frame of life in words and drawings to be honest.

Shaista Aziz

January 16, 2016 at 9:19 AM

Very nicee...

David William Breidenthal

January 16, 2016 at 7:33 PM

Thank you for your encouragement on my work. XD

Andrea Dietrich

January 15, 2016 at 5:48 PM

I really like this one! YAS!

David William Breidenthal

January 16, 2016 at 7:32 PM

Thank you, Andrea. You are a great writer - yas! :) Have a fantastic day!

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 15, 2016 at 10:57 AM

When the heart is the sea and wild the sea is then "Hard it is to sail!" Optimism though makes the waves to die thus easily one can sail! Wonderful my friend J.W.E.

David William Breidenthal

January 16, 2016 at 7:32 PM

You are spot on! :) YAS! Awesome imagery you had with your words of wisdom. Thank you kindly. #JWME