Optimism

I might write like a landscape
In any form and shape
If my judge, yet, with fancies
Does reject my masterpiece
I'm not a faded flower
This I know that each lover
Faces platonic effects
And, at the end, resurrects....!



01 June 2022
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Thomas Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 12:25 PM
It is writings such as this that makes me wish I could sit and just listen to the writers thoughts. You have said much here :) I apologize for not using your name, as I am not sure which is your first.
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 1:35 PM
Yes, optimism is key when writing for others. We need to be sure we are pleased ourselves with what we write!!
Foster Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 9:44 AM
Love writes of all kinds... shapes ... sizes... wonderful work... Ann
Alex Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 7:15 PM
Thank you very much.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 10:28 PM
In any form or shape. An experienced poet does just that... many forms. Me, well to keep mind sharp, I rhyme most of the time. Great read!
Alex Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 7:15 PM
Thank you very much.
Canerdy Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 3:02 PM
That's right, Christuraj. Keep on keeping on. Inspiring write. Janice
Alex Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 7:15 PM
Thank you very much.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 7:42 AM
Interesting read.
Alex Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 11:36 PM
Thank you very much.
Delaney Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 5:05 AM
Wise words, Christuraj : It is all in how the reader relates and what experience they bring to the poem. Enjoyed. SuZ
Alex Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 11:36 PM
Thank you very much.
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