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Optic Mystic

there is a bright side
                                           to the dark

                                       let your I adjust





MagiCicada13

darkintrospectionlightsenryu

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Paul Marc

December 22, 2023 at 10:12 AM

How did I miss this one? Fav.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 27, 2023 at 8:35 PM

I forgot this one! Thank you :)))

Line Gauthier

December 19, 2018 at 11:37 PM

Very witty, Maureen. Love it.

Phil Capitano

December 17, 2018 at 10:44 AM

Cryptic script, Maureen, and says so much. Meditations are made of this stuff; deep.

Millard Lowe

December 9, 2018 at 4:54 PM

Beautiful allegorical approach. Wisdom most often dwells in the darkness of contemplation! Nice read. Thanks for sharing. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 10, 2018 at 8:35 AM

Thank you Millard :) xomo

Kim Rodrigues

November 29, 2018 at 9:54 AM

Nicely done!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 29, 2018 at 9:58 AM

Thank you! :))) xomo

Gershon Wolf

November 24, 2018 at 10:16 PM

Aye, aye, Ma'am! Season's best, Gershon

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 25, 2018 at 12:13 AM

Thank you Wolf Man, xomo

Caren Krutsinger

November 23, 2018 at 9:09 AM

Being a third eye advocate, this one wows me.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 23, 2018 at 9:28 AM

Thank you so much! .:) xomo!

Rhona Mcferran

November 21, 2018 at 12:50 PM

Another very clever one, Mo! (I need this reminder often!)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 22, 2018 at 7:29 AM

Thank you! (me myself and I do too;) xomo <3

Chris Green

November 21, 2018 at 12:33 PM

Definitely something "I" needed to hear today. Thank you so much for sharing this my friend.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 22, 2018 at 7:28 AM

Advice I need to heed myself these days ;) thank YOU <3 xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 21, 2018 at 11:37 AM

Marvelously profound dearest, Maureen ! A fav for me! Hugsxxx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 22, 2018 at 7:28 AM

Honoured my friend! Thank you so much <3 xomo!

John Lawless

November 21, 2018 at 7:49 AM

...love the wordplay......

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 22, 2018 at 7:27 AM

Thank you John :) xomo!

Vegter Papyrus

November 21, 2018 at 2:56 AM

i opening possibilities. one of the best Senryu poems i've read!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 22, 2018 at 7:26 AM

Wow! Honoured :))) thank you! xomo

Tom Cunningham

November 21, 2018 at 1:56 AM

Great advice Maureen told in a few words. Tom.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 22, 2018 at 7:25 AM

Thank you Tom :) xomo

Arthur Vaso

November 21, 2018 at 1:06 AM

sent you an email :)

Arthur Vaso

November 21, 2018 at 1:05 AM

ah words of wisdom, even eye should follow!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 22, 2018 at 7:24 AM

The third eye sees the deepest ;)

Ann Gilmour

November 21, 2018 at 1:02 AM

I love this Maureen, so thought provoking and so few words - brilliant, a fav for me! Kindest thoughts Ann x

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 22, 2018 at 7:22 AM

Thank you so much Ann! :))) xomo <3

Geoffrey Brewer

November 21, 2018 at 12:26 AM

Brilliant in its enlightened focus, wisdom and brevity, not to mention one of the best puns I have ever heard. Very well done, Maureen

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 22, 2018 at 7:21 AM

Wow :)) thank you Geoffrey! xomo

James Marshall Goff

November 20, 2018 at 10:49 PM

Line 3 blows my mind...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 22, 2018 at 7:19 AM

Delighted :) thank you! xomo

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