Opposites

Lost Selfish, sensual Controlling, smoldering, rebelling Sulkiness, steeliness, strongness, special Understanding, sympathizing, loving Spiritual, steadfast Saved
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Chachere Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 11:21 AM
At least their both lost but saved in the end. Great write.hope all is well with you Sara.its been a while. ~always&forever Lynette
Onclaud Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 1:33 PM
enjoyed the polarity of images here, sara..... you are multi-faceted!... S for superb!..:) huggs!
Michelle Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 8:01 AM
'Incedible write' is right! great poem sara =Juli-Michelle=
Sivey Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 5:04 PM
I really love this incredible write my friend! You've done masterfully with this form! Wonderfully done Sara! Great Work!
Deeks Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 5:00 PM
Sara this is breathtaking honestly.. i understand this so well, in my version of events.. the ying and yang of relationship, where we are both the top and bottom at different moments yet never really see our own shortcomings...a wonderful piece.. tyvm karen
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