Opposites

The time has come, but now it's past
I knew you first, you knew me last
The first is old, the last is new
I paid it all, no it's past due
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 6:06 PM
this is REALLY GOOD. Congrats. I sure enjoyed it.
Reese Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 9:39 PM
Thanks, when I wrote years ago I was just having a bit of fun.
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 7:30 AM
many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Mehta Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 5:40 AM
Quite intriguing write on opposites, a deep one,Charles
Reese Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 9:19 AM
Thanks, many of my poems are thought provoking.
Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 5:36 AM
Prodigious ...Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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August 26, 2014 at 9:47 PM
Charles :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~
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